Recently, though, they printed a poem which totally charmed me with its seductively witty and spare construction.
When I googled it, to see if I could find it for you, dear readers, I discovered that the poet - Ciara Shuttleworth - had tossed it off in her graduate Prosody and Form class, during class. Furthermore, it's a thoroughly rigid poem form, here wrought with great precision and economy.
Part of me wants to write a six word sestina myself, for the intellectual exercise. Most of me is happy to know that someone else has done it with such aplomb.
This is magnificent! I've attempted many sestinas in my lifetime. They are extremely challenging to write. The idea of writing one with just 6 words has never occurred to me. This one is stunningly effective.
ReplyDeleteI feel the same way about poetry. Unless I read it aloud my eyes want to go too fast, and reading it aloud makes me feel like a weenie. This is admirable.
ReplyDeleteThere are many fixed forms in poetry, and we come across so few of them because they are remarkably demanding.
ReplyDeleteThis is really fun - thank you for sharing it. I enjoy poetry, but loathe exercise.
wow, I know so little about poetry. never heard of this construct. amazingly difficult it would seem to me. my eyes glazed over just reading the wiki description!
ReplyDeletebut I loved reading this. very cool.
I am literal-minded also, but for some reason I have always loved poetry.
ReplyDeleteThat's definitely impressive.
very, very nice.
ReplyDeleteI tried. Meh.
ReplyDeleteGeorge,
You
Always
Upset
Gladys
So.
So.
George.
Gladys,
You
Upset.
Always.
Always
So
Upset,
George:
You,
Gladys.
Gladys:
Always
You.
So,
George:
Upset!
You
Upset
So.
Gladys
Always,
George.
So: you,
George, upset
Gladys -- always.
WOOT TO SLOUCHY!!!! Way to go!
ReplyDeleteIt even reads oddly well (and beautifully) if you read the two columns as you usually would a sentence.
ReplyDelete(You well...used you. To love, love me. and so on)
I love poetry that resonates along your bones.
Ooooo, there was Haiku Friday. We could have Sestina Sunday . . .
ReplyDeleteSlouchy FTW! Amazing poems all around.
ReplyDeleteOutstanding. And Slouchy too!
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