06 December 2010

Love Me To Used Well You

I am generally too literal minded for poetry. Oh, once in a while, something strikes my fancy or hits my synapses just right, but generally speaking, I skip over the poems in the New Yorker.

Recently, though, they printed a poem which totally charmed me with its seductively witty and spare construction.


When I googled it, to see if I could find it for you, dear readers, I discovered that the poet - Ciara Shuttleworth - had tossed it off in her graduate Prosody and Form class, during class. Furthermore, it's a thoroughly rigid poem form, here wrought with great precision and economy.

Part of me wants to write a six word sestina myself, for the intellectual exercise. Most of me is happy to know that someone else has done it with such aplomb.

12 comments:

  1. This is magnificent! I've attempted many sestinas in my lifetime. They are extremely challenging to write. The idea of writing one with just 6 words has never occurred to me. This one is stunningly effective.

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  2. I feel the same way about poetry. Unless I read it aloud my eyes want to go too fast, and reading it aloud makes me feel like a weenie. This is admirable.

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  3. Anonymous5:15 PM

    There are many fixed forms in poetry, and we come across so few of them because they are remarkably demanding.

    This is really fun - thank you for sharing it. I enjoy poetry, but loathe exercise.

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  4. wow, I know so little about poetry. never heard of this construct. amazingly difficult it would seem to me. my eyes glazed over just reading the wiki description!

    but I loved reading this. very cool.

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  5. I am literal-minded also, but for some reason I have always loved poetry.

    That's definitely impressive.

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  6. very, very nice.

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  7. I tried. Meh.

    George,
    You
    Always
    Upset
    Gladys
    So.

    So.
    George.
    Gladys,
    You
    Upset.
    Always.

    Always
    So
    Upset,
    George:
    You,
    Gladys.

    Gladys:
    Always
    You.
    So,
    George:
    Upset!

    You
    Upset
    So.
    Gladys
    Always,
    George.

    So: you,
    George, upset
    Gladys -- always.

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  8. WOOT TO SLOUCHY!!!! Way to go!

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  9. It even reads oddly well (and beautifully) if you read the two columns as you usually would a sentence.
    (You well...used you. To love, love me. and so on)

    I love poetry that resonates along your bones.

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  10. Ooooo, there was Haiku Friday. We could have Sestina Sunday . . .

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  11. Slouchy FTW! Amazing poems all around.

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  12. Outstanding. And Slouchy too!

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