19 June 2009

Kindergarten Haiku


Like a lightbulb in the sky,
Moonlight on the pond.


Okay, maybe it's not really a haiku, but it is poetry, at least in the eyes of the author's mother.

20 comments:

  1. Of course it's poetry.

    T.

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  2. She is GIFTED!!! I am telling you RIGHT NOW!


    I loe it..........

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  3. I love it. She can ((see)) things.

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  4. so wonderful! she is very poetic.

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  5. It's beautiful. She's very talented.

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  6. She has the soul of a poet. Just lovely.

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  7. this is beautiful, I kind of wish it was mine

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  8. It's poetry, and a very nice bit of imagery!

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  9. Anonymous10:21 AM

    beautiful.

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  10. It is lovely. And she rawks the *s. ;-)

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  11. i particularly like the way that moonlight - in its pictorial representation - vaguely resembles a dancing rooster. :)

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  12. I especially love the spelling of sky as sgi. Perfectly phonetic.

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  13. It works for me. I immediately got images. That's poetry.

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  14. Anonymous2:32 PM

    It is beautiful poetry. Stunning, really.

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  15. Amazing. And she's got that asterisk thing down cold.

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  16. That's some beautiful poetry. I daresay some adults couldn't write a poem like that. She is very talented. She must get that from her mother.

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